The CoffeeHouse
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The CoffeeHouse
The floor vibrated with the cheers of the crowd and the blistering voice of music. It was nearing the end of October and my school was hosting a Coffee House, we do this once or twice a year to allow young artists within the school to go up and give it a shot. There were solemn few who could actually MAKE decent music.
My friends were up right now as I sat shaking in my seat for I was next. It would be my first time actually performing live and I was going to be playing one of my guitar lines.. I cant sing very well so I decided I'd just try out to play a couple guitar lines I had written.
The guitar hummed through the vibrant air and the sound of the drums being pounded onto and smashed constantly, the low rhythm of the bass and the voice of the vocalist. This was anything BUT quiet. I had never been to a concert and I assumed this would only be a fraction of what it feels like.
The students burst out into a loud cheer as each instrument faded out and my friends each bowed then exitted the stage. My stomach was in knots and my head spinning. Mr Heeley the music teacher and the one hosting the Coffee House tapped my shoulder and motioned me to go up. I nodded slightly and grabbed my guitar. Its black and orange glossy design shone in the lights as I stepped onto the stage.
Peoples looked over and caught sight of me. Some of my friends in audiance waved and called out my name trying to get me to look at them. Others laughed and muttered things like "Who the fuck's that?" and "Kid needs a haircut!"Yeah.. I probobly did. my hair was pretty long is flowed over my shoulders and half my face..
I kept walking, ahead was a small stool and infront microphones, two. One for the guitar to be amplified and the second for the singer. I took a seat on the stood and swallowed.
"Hello. My name's.. umm, Jake." people got quiter and begun looking towards the stage. "I have two acoustic songs I've written to play tonight. I'm not a very good singer so I'm just hear to jam out alittle for you all." I tried joking but nobody laughed. My heart sunk as they probobly thought looked like a loser by this point. I swollowed again and cleared my throat. By now small drops of sweat were falling down my forehead, I wiped them away with my sleeve and pulled a small glossy black pick from my pocket. "My first song is titled, So If I Told You. It was the first song I had ever written for guitar and lyrical wise."
People started clapping and I begun my song. I threw my arm up and down franticly strumming chords and plucking strings note by note. The crowd seemed to be liking it for the first minute or so then it grew off. It bored them, no lyrics? Nothing to sing.. just simply chords and notes. Even if it was well played it couldnt hold there attention and i stopped. People turned back to me and i spoke.
"You know what. Lemme re-try. I'm going to sing this instead, if I'm not a very good singer I apologize. Here i go." I closed my eyes, took a deep breath and strummed a C chord on the guitar and quickly began plucking at the strings up and down. I did this 3 more times with other chords then moved forward and opened my mouth ready to sing.
The crowd seemed in awe. I thought I could see people crying across the crowd. I smiled, apparently I was a good singer and artist after all.
"Okay.. I see that caught your attention, now for the second song. I was originally going to play a song me and my friend wrote together but..." my eyes caught a familiar face in the crowd. It was my ex girlfriend, "Breanne" . I smiled . " This song was written a few months ago when me and my girlfriend were in a tight spot. Everything had fallen apart but afterwords we ended up fixing things. Recently.... we ended up breaking down again this time we haven't fixed it yet, and.. I dont think she wants to fix it. But I'm still trying, I want to make things better, I want t change and have her back. This song was when I believed we would be together ForNever, but when in fact I wanted her Forever." Breannes face was watering she tried looking away and hiding it. "For-Never"
"You okay?" I asked, "What the heck are you doing?"
"Your guitar.." she said quietly.
"Fuck the guitar, are you okay?"
She nodded and replied, "I love you Jake." then threw her arms around my neck.
The crowd burst out into a giant wave of "Awwwwwwwwh" . I smiled puzzildely but accepted it and wrapped my arms around her, cause she was the only one I would do it for, the only one I wanted.
My friends were up right now as I sat shaking in my seat for I was next. It would be my first time actually performing live and I was going to be playing one of my guitar lines.. I cant sing very well so I decided I'd just try out to play a couple guitar lines I had written.
The guitar hummed through the vibrant air and the sound of the drums being pounded onto and smashed constantly, the low rhythm of the bass and the voice of the vocalist. This was anything BUT quiet. I had never been to a concert and I assumed this would only be a fraction of what it feels like.
The students burst out into a loud cheer as each instrument faded out and my friends each bowed then exitted the stage. My stomach was in knots and my head spinning. Mr Heeley the music teacher and the one hosting the Coffee House tapped my shoulder and motioned me to go up. I nodded slightly and grabbed my guitar. Its black and orange glossy design shone in the lights as I stepped onto the stage.
Peoples looked over and caught sight of me. Some of my friends in audiance waved and called out my name trying to get me to look at them. Others laughed and muttered things like "Who the fuck's that?" and "Kid needs a haircut!"Yeah.. I probobly did. my hair was pretty long is flowed over my shoulders and half my face..
I kept walking, ahead was a small stool and infront microphones, two. One for the guitar to be amplified and the second for the singer. I took a seat on the stood and swallowed.
"Hello. My name's.. umm, Jake." people got quiter and begun looking towards the stage. "I have two acoustic songs I've written to play tonight. I'm not a very good singer so I'm just hear to jam out alittle for you all." I tried joking but nobody laughed. My heart sunk as they probobly thought looked like a loser by this point. I swollowed again and cleared my throat. By now small drops of sweat were falling down my forehead, I wiped them away with my sleeve and pulled a small glossy black pick from my pocket. "My first song is titled, So If I Told You. It was the first song I had ever written for guitar and lyrical wise."
People started clapping and I begun my song. I threw my arm up and down franticly strumming chords and plucking strings note by note. The crowd seemed to be liking it for the first minute or so then it grew off. It bored them, no lyrics? Nothing to sing.. just simply chords and notes. Even if it was well played it couldnt hold there attention and i stopped. People turned back to me and i spoke.
"You know what. Lemme re-try. I'm going to sing this instead, if I'm not a very good singer I apologize. Here i go." I closed my eyes, took a deep breath and strummed a C chord on the guitar and quickly began plucking at the strings up and down. I did this 3 more times with other chords then moved forward and opened my mouth ready to sing.
- The Song:
Song : So If I Told You (I Loved You)
Artist : ALoveToLastForNever
As Written by Jake Nordstrom
Verse
I strummed a song
Guess it got cought your ear
Baby is this wrong?
Without you darling I had no fear
Now months have passed
and I wish you were here
Cause now months have passed
and without you.. its my time to dissapear.
Pre Chorus
Now I'm trying to hard to be
The one you want to see
Someone who used to be me
Just another lost memory..
Chorus
So If I Told You I loved you now
Could we be together please?
Then if I told you, you were the one
Rejected I'll fall to my kness
But If I told you I loved you now
Could we make things right?
and if I asked you to stay here now
Would you be with me tonight?
Verse 2
It was the day we first met
Swear you caught me in a net
I was hooked from the start
Right before you ripped me apart
So whats the reaosn?
Baby this is treason..
Tell me, could he mean this much to you?
Tell me, did you just need someone new?
Pre Chorus 2
Now I'm trying so hard to be
The one you want to see
Now I'm trying so hard to be
This person who used to be me
(Repeat Chorus)
Bridge
You Found Someone New...
You asked me to wait...
You looked right through...
You never knew...
BABY I LOVED YOU!
You never came back?
And now I'm falling off this track..
But i wont let this go
I have to let her know!
(Repeat Chorus)
Ending Chorus
So if I told you I loved you now
Would you still be mine?
And if I told you I was lost
Would you even miss me?
Now if I asked you not to go
Would you say were meant to be?
So if I told you I loved you now
Would you fall back in my arms?
So if I told you I loved you now
Would you say the same?
And so I told you I loved you now..
I'll wait for you somehow...
The crowd seemed in awe. I thought I could see people crying across the crowd. I smiled, apparently I was a good singer and artist after all.
"Okay.. I see that caught your attention, now for the second song. I was originally going to play a song me and my friend wrote together but..." my eyes caught a familiar face in the crowd. It was my ex girlfriend, "Breanne" . I smiled . " This song was written a few months ago when me and my girlfriend were in a tight spot. Everything had fallen apart but afterwords we ended up fixing things. Recently.... we ended up breaking down again this time we haven't fixed it yet, and.. I dont think she wants to fix it. But I'm still trying, I want to make things better, I want t change and have her back. This song was when I believed we would be together ForNever, but when in fact I wanted her Forever." Breannes face was watering she tried looking away and hiding it. "For-Never"
- The Song:
For(N)ever
Artist : ALoveToLastForNever
As written by Jake Nordstrom
Darling dont cry, I’ll say
I know I’m not worth it
And they tell me everyday
I know I have nothing much to say.
But the second you leave my arms I cry
And I know I dont deserve you so
Will Tonight be the last night
I hold your hand forever
Cause hes running through your head
And hes calling out your name
As you call his in return
Cause you need him back more then ever
You want to be in his arms forever
Anc stay in mine for-never…
So I’ll ask you to stay
Because all alone without you
Ill never find the words to say
And i swear every simple word I’ve said was true
Darling I’m just trying to say
I couldnt live without you
And I’ll try so hard everyday
And Honestly if you found someone new
I wouldnt know what to do
Cause everytime we fight
I lose sight of my light
And everytime I see your face
My heart seems to fit back in place
But now hes running through your head
And he’s calling out your name
As you call his in return
Cause you need him more then ever
And want to be in his arms forever
And stay in mine for-never… -
"You okay?" I asked, "What the heck are you doing?"
"Your guitar.." she said quietly.
"Fuck the guitar, are you okay?"
She nodded and replied, "I love you Jake." then threw her arms around my neck.
The crowd burst out into a giant wave of "Awwwwwwwwh" . I smiled puzzildely but accepted it and wrapped my arms around her, cause she was the only one I would do it for, the only one I wanted.
Cookiez- Admin
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Re: The CoffeeHouse
Its a great story, I really like it!
Is it a real one?
Is it a real one?
Uri- Advanced
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Re: The CoffeeHouse
6th paragraph 2 line; stool*, 7th paragraph 3rd line probably*, 7th paragraph fourth line swallowed*, Verse 2 5th line reason* I loved the story and the songs and you. Probably one of the best stories I've read in a long while.
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Re: The CoffeeHouse
lol thanks. The story itself isnt real.. the coffee house at my school was the other day. this is what was going on in my head thinking if I were to go or not. But i didnt end up going.. and this would surely not happen. Breanne doesnt exist.. its a name I gave to hide the true identity or the girl. But i released her name in my other story thingy bout my life. so doesnt matter i guess xD
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Re: The CoffeeHouse
dude i dun cry eading alot of stories but that *sniff* was too epic :D
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LMAO thanks? i think xD
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