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Post by +Mikey! Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:51 pm

Doesn't Look Right 105rxnq Doesn't Look Right Fyelau Doesn't Look Right 2nbd08h I don't thing it fits a maple char


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Post by Miloth Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:58 pm

It reminds me of La tale (green)
If the Darker Green Part of the hair means the back shouldn't it behind the ear.
It reminds me of something.
I don't like the way it covers the left part of the eye like that.
Good hair.
And Your right.
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Post by +Mikey! Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:06 pm

Should i take the hair sticking out where the left eye is?
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Post by Emoticon Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:12 pm

Looks really similar to the hair I'm using right now. It seems a bit blurry on my screen. And you should make a hat to go with it.
It's really good though. No mistakes with the shading and outline as far as I'm concerned.
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Post by Minh Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:24 am

Make strands sharp fill in the blank area on the left fix unneeded outline. Shadings good , needs custom eyes
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Post by Cookiez Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:56 am

decent design shading and hair strands could stand out better tho.
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Post by Uri Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:52 pm

You know when i was looking at it i just had motivation.

why wont you turn it to other side?
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Post by Emoticon Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:38 pm

+Mikey! wrote:Should i take the hair sticking out where the left eye is?
I think you should either make it straighter or remove it.
Make the lower part of the bangs darker.
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Post by Uri Sat Jul 03, 2010 4:23 pm

the hair is based on a NPC (there was a post on it) that why its not matching
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Post by +Mikey! Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:47 pm

Lol i didn't Base it off an NPC. I just started from Scratch.
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Post by IAznpoke Sat Jul 03, 2010 7:29 pm

Uri... got pwned 8D

OT: Well, Yea It doesn't look right, maybe try flipping it... :D
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Post by +Mikey! Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:22 pm

If you say so.
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