At Shea Stadium
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At Shea Stadium
by LordObsidian Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:51 pm
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- Paul wanted to learn more about The Beatles. His father bought him the best book he could about The Beatles. Paul’s favorite Beatle was Paul McCartney. Some people in school noticed how he was looking for a Paul McCartney Biography in the library. So people just walked by him and said ‘’Well if it isn’t Paul McCartney.’’ Paul knew they were just joking so he giggled when they would say that. Some people would actually make fun of him for being interested in learning about The Beatles.
One day a fellow classmate of Paul saw The Beatles book when Paul’s backpack was open widely. So the ‘’fellow’’ classmate decided quickly to grab it and run away with it. Paul noticed what he had done so he took the book back in his arms before that ‘’book stealer’’ ran away with it. Paul said ‘’It’s my bloody book!’’ He started to talk with a Liverpool Accent like The Beatles did. Everyone called him a Beatle freak now.
The next day Paul opened the book he saw a page with red text that said do not flip the page. Paul knew it was some kind of joke so he flipped the page. Next thing he knew he was at Shea Stadium holding a Hofner Bass Guitar. He was in Paul McCartney’s Body!
Also you should know that I myself am a ''Beatle Freak''
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Re: At Shea Stadium
by Panda Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:57 pm
You need more adjectives and to work on the punctuation its a no from me man sawwie :C
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Re: At Shea Stadium
by BadMSAnimator Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:46 pm
O-o.....
No offense, but this goes under "OMG you fail."
After a quotation, you always start a new paragraph.
The first sentence really irks me. "Paul wanted to learn more about The Beatles."
Sorry, but it really doesn't interest me.
No offense, but this goes under "OMG you fail."
After a quotation, you always start a new paragraph.
The first sentence really irks me. "Paul wanted to learn more about The Beatles."
Sorry, but it really doesn't interest me.
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