The MS Thief legend Story (NOT REAL)
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The MS Thief legend Story (NOT REAL)
OK so, I wanted to make a story for a new class on MS, it isn't out yet, I have heard rumors about it being on the next session of KMST, but whatever. I wanted to make my own story, this will be updated every time I feel like it xD. If you notice, this will continue the small bit of Aran's story you play on MS.
- "Chapter 1: What a pathetic child":
- "KUNI!" Yelled the step father.
"Yes sir?" Kuni said in a tone that sounded weak.
"Where is my dinner!"
"I have not prepared it yet sir" Kuni answered.
"You son of a bitch! You are a pathetic excuse for a child!" The step-father said as he slapped Kuni across the face.
"Get out of my sight!" Kuni ran to her room and started crying into her pillow made of old rags.
"Why must my life be like this!"
"I should just run away! Train to become a warrior, then maybe one day I could be a legend!" Kuni was deep in thought when the step-father barged in and picked her up by the collar of her shirt.
"What is this talk of running away?!" he yelled
"Oh nothing Sir, I wasn't really going to."
"I know you wouldn't. You would be dead within a day! You scrawny pest!"
"I WOULD NOT BE SO SCRAWNY IF YOU FED ME ENOUGH FOOD!" Kuni yelled.
"THAT IS MY CHOICE! I am the one who puts a roof over your head!" The step-father said as he threw Kuni against the wall.
"Now stop crying and make dinner!" He yelled. Kuni wept in the corner of her room, enraged but feeling she can't do anything about it.
- "Chapter 2: Run Kuni, Run":
- "Stupid Step father, stupid house, stupid food!" Kuni said as she accidentally dropped an egg.
"KUNI WHAT WAS THAT?!" the step father yelled.
"Nothing, I am just making your dinner." Said Kuni.
"Why did my mom have to die? she was so nice, unlike this ******." Kuni said quietly. After making the dinner she gave it to her step dad and asked
"May I have some?"
"He, sure." The step dad said as he handed her a piece of bread.
"Thank you! This is more than you have ever given me!" Kuni said excitedly.
"Don't get used to it, I only gave that to you because I am still a little full from lunch!" The step dad said. Kuni went to her room happily, but then remembered that soon enough, she would be beaten again.
"That is it! I am leaving" She said, out of her happy mood. She didn't have anything to pack, except her one set of clothes. She opened her window and jumped out. The step-father was eating and heard the window open and then a thud. He went outside to see Kuni there.
"Get back here!" he screamed. Kuni ran, she ran as fast as she could to the nearest town, Henesys. When she made it, everyone looked at her because her hair was silver and messy. A woman came up and said
"Oh dear, what is wrong? You look tired, and look at you! You have no meat on those bones! Come, I shall feed you and care for you." The woman took Kuni to her house.
"Ok here is some soup, chicken, and pork! Eat up, then you can take a bath down at the sea, I can take you there!"
"Now before you scarf everything down, tell me why you were running, and why you are like this!" The woman said. Kuni looked her in the eye and said
"It all started when my mom died..."
- "Chapter 3: The first blade":
- "Kuni! Time for dinner!" Kara said.
"Ok Kara, I'm coming!" Kuni said. Kuni walked into the house, smiling, for the first time since Kara adopted her.
"So what's for dinner?" Kuni asked,
"Oh we are having hamburgers." Kara replied.
"Awesome!" Kuni said.
"Now go wash up, looks like you had a lot of fun outside!"
"I did! Richard and Hirari are such awesome friends!" Kuni said.
"Well its good to see you smiling!" Kara said.
"Ya, I have been a lot happier since you got me away from that devil of a man." Kuni said cheerfully, "Ok I'm gonna go wash up, I'll come down for dinner in a sec." Kuni said, leaving to take a bath.
***
"Ah, man I'm stuffed! I don't think I could eat for another week!" Kuni said happily.
"Well glad you liked it" Kara said.
"Well I'm gonna go to bed Kara." Kuni said.
"Okay, sweet dreams."
***
"What was that?" Kuni asked as she woke up suddenly.
"Ugh probably just my imagination." Kuni said as she closed her eyes. boom, boom, boom, Kuni woke up again,
"Ugh! What is that?!" Kuni said. She got out of her bed and followed the sound. It lead her outside, she looked around, nothing. Then again boom, boom, boom.
"Where is it coming from! I can tell it is here somewhere but where!" Right as she finished saying that the ground in front of her cracked open and a dagger flew out of it, burning, floating in the air. "Whoa!" Kuni said, for some reason she had the urge to grab it, she reached but the blade backed away and put a scratch on her hand.
"Ow! What the hell was that!?" She said. In her head she could hear a big, gruff voice rattling around saying
"I am the Blade of the Flame!"
"I have come to you to ask for help! If you can help me, I shall let you wield me as your weapon!" "What? but I am not a fighter!" Kuni said.
"But you are, I can feel it within you, now for my favor."
"I need you to help me find my sister, the Blade of Ice." The voice said.
"If you find her, I am sure she would also let you wield her!"
"But, I don't want to fight!" Kuni said.
"Really Kuni? You know that deep inside you are aching to try out adventuring! Like those friends of yours, what were their names? Umm oh yes the purple haired girl Hirari, and the boy with the hat that has wings, Richard." The voice said.
"Okay that may be true but, how am I supposed to find your sister?" Kuni asked.
"All I know is she told me she was going on vacation for a week, its been a month and no sign of her. I am pretty sure she said she was going to Mt. Everest." The voice said.
"Well i don't think I can withstand that cold!" Kuni said.
"I shall come with you, warm you, give you oxygen, all you need to do is dig around the snow, see if you can find her!" The voice said.
"Alright fine... Tomorrow, find me when I go outside."
- "Chapter 4: I was tripped, frozen, and saved":
- Kuni walked outside and found the dagger stabbed into the ground.
"Ok, you ready to find your sister?" Kuni said.
"Yes, yes I am!" The blade said in her mind.
"Ok I will teleport you there make sure to hold me while we are there, so you don't freeze!" Kuni grabbed him by the handle and they warped to a sheer cold place, but Kuni could not feel anything. "Again DO NOT, let go of me! You nee to hold me so I can keep you warm." The blade reminded Kuni. "Alright, time to dig!" Kuni said. She started tearing away at snow with her empty hand and used the blade to dig a little. She couldn't find anything where she was so walked farther up kicking the snow as she went up, the snow melting right off of her. She kept searching, and searching but nothing.
"I can't find her!" Kuni said.
"Keep searching! I know she is here I can sense her!" The Blade said. Kuni kept going, she went up higher and higher, still nothing. Kuni started walking up again and started ranting to the blade
"This is so hard! I am never gonna find her!" Not looking where she was walking, she tripped over a rock, dropping the blade. In a second Kuni's fingers were turning blue, and she could barley breath. When all of a sudden a pile of snow started shaking and BOOM! A blade that looked as cold as ice. "Brother!" She yelled at the sight of the fire blade.
"Don't worry about me! Save the girl!" He said.
"Oh My!" The Ice blade said. She slipped herself into Kuni's hand. Kuni felt stronger, she wasn't cold, the frostbite was going away, she felt great.
"Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!!"
"So, why are you two here?" The icy blade asked.
"We came to look for you!" The flame blade said.
"Why would you look for me? Didn't you get my message that I was extending my vacation to 2 months?" The Ice blade asked.
"NO! No one ever told me that!" The fire blade said.
"Oh well it is true!" The icy blade said.
"Well since you found me, I will let you wield me, I am sure my brother already agreed!" The ice blade said.
"Awesome! But I have to hide you guys from Kara, she would get mad." Kuni said.
"Ok, we will be outside, invisible to everybody but you." The Flame blade said.
"Alright, get me home!" Kuni said. The Blades formed ice and fire around Kuni, after it was gone, she was back home.
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Re: The MS Thief legend Story (NOT REAL)
Thats a classic beggining...
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Re: The MS Thief legend Story (NOT REAL)
IKR LOL, meh couldn't think of anything else o.o
But, I will update it every time I get something new so o.o
But, I will update it every time I get something new so o.o
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I'm not sure how many stories I've read involves a HORRIBLE parent/step-parent o-o but still, it is pretty good c:
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Updated :3
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Re: The MS Thief legend Story (NOT REAL)
Longer please.
I like this story, but the intro needs a bit more suspense.
I like this story, but the intro needs a bit more suspense.
Re: The MS Thief legend Story (NOT REAL)
updated, 3rd chapter added
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