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Post by Uri Wed Oct 06, 2010 3:49 pm

Once upon a time... Well, it wasn't too long ago... Only few days ago, there was a teenager; he was a normal teenager, while he was unusual... He was a 12 year old teenager, All the kids laughed at him, they thought he was weird, they thought he was crazy, they thought he was many things... But no, He was normal.
One day, the bullies started hitting him, The poor teenager couldn't do anything, They were strong and big while he was...little.
The bullies kept hitting him for two years, until he couldn't go on, he had to do something... Something that wouldstop everything. He chose to make his biggest mistake ever.
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He stabbed the bullies.






That's one way that people are stabbing others, rage.
Sometimes pain leads to pain.


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Post by BadMSAnimator Thu Oct 07, 2010 2:24 am

Wat.

Grammar fixes:

You don't capitalize after commas.

The story is meh. Waaaay too short, even for a "short story".
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